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Poetry: “In the Black”

By Amiah Taylor, 15
Pennsylvania

Art by Gracie Gralike, 19
Missouri

 

The swarms of her come to attack her

The words biting, red welts and stings

Like bees, they steal the honey from her

And leave her a sad, flowerless thing

 

The roots of her, weigh her down

Planted, embedded, one, with the negativity

Every step is a weight and a weight and a wait

She's like a tree, standing, unmoving, there's just fate

 

The colors of her are whisked away, into a gray

To match the steel locks, clamped on her brain

And with black and white vision, her eyes are betrayed

Seeing change's tombstone and everything as the same

 

The feelings of her would come to the surface

Fragile, shining bubbles, pre-destined to pop

Her whole word was stuck in a nightmare catcher

A cell, trapped in the darkness of her own thoughts

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  1. I love this poem! It really made me think and I even had to read some lines over to really understand what they meant but once I did everything clicked. The last line wrapped it all together. :)

  2. This poem is amazing, it has a meaning that many may not quite get. I know I didn't understand it fully the first time I read it. It took me a few times to go over it befor I got the full meaning. Great writting I hope you continue and never let anyone's negative thoughts or comments stop you from writting. :) This is truely amazing :)

  3. Man i get what she saying, people make you feel like worthless and nothing, but got to lift your self up and show thome they dont run you.

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